SJC Realty Commercial

Its URL is http://youtube.com/watch?v=J2cub1S8ocI

Above is the our first commercial that was Aired on KCNS 38 (Cable 21) during Chinese programming time of "Money War"

Below was the first version that didn't make it but which the concept was based.
Its URL is http://youtube.com/watch?v=T_TDClbtlQ8



Which one did you think was more effective? Why? Your input is appreciated!